Second Annual Brigid in Cyberspace Poetry Reading
Lots of really great poetry out there. My contribution, written several years ago. There are three parts, but I won’t post them all. If you want to read the rest it is at http://jasidog.com/poetry-content/24/web-life-trilogy
Web Life Trilogy
By Lyric – 18 September 03
He said “all that was, is now done”
“Sorry, babe you just ain’t the one.”
She said “oh, that is ok”
“Been flat, for awhile any way”
Her chirpy fingers type, LOL
Her soul has slowly gone grey
He said “We’ll be friends forever”
She types “could it get any better?”
She is now vitriolic inside.
There is no smile in her eyes.
He thinks it has gone very well
No mess to clean up, no hell
she is now a pit dark as night
Crying out to the vanishing light
I hope you dick goes limp
I hope she laughs when you think
I hope she rips out your soul
I hope you never grow old
I hope she is your acid rain
I hope she gives you my pain
Comment ID #274
very well spoken poem!! I really liked it, I too blogged a poem silently of course!
Comment ID #279
Hullo, Suzanne. I remember that poem. After what I went thru 3 years ago, in hindsight, it was spot on.
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